Aubrey, your poem is heart-breaking. When I read you poem, I could see that poor girl being stuck with anorexia, and trying to cope with her sisters death. You are a brilliant writer and I love how you made an ode to Ana, and used end rhyme and all that! It helped you poem sound great! Keep up the good work!
Aubrey, you have an amazing poem. You speak the truth about what people go through when they hit this stage. Aubrey you are a good write, and your imagery is strong, and have you went through this, in your life or experienced this with your friends?
Thank you very much Tyreek. I somewhat struggle with this on a regular basis and It has very much been a part of my life through my family and some friends.
Aubrey, your poem is heart-breaking. When I read you poem, I could see that poor girl being stuck with anorexia, and trying to cope with her sisters death. You are a brilliant writer and I love how you made an ode to Ana, and used end rhyme and all that! It helped you poem sound great! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteAubrey, you have an amazing poem. You speak the truth about what people go through when they hit this stage. Aubrey you are a good write, and your imagery is strong, and have you went through this, in your life or experienced this with your friends?
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Tyreek. I somewhat struggle with this on a regular basis and It has very much been a part of my life through my family and some friends.
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